[YourMum]

Hi! Here is some girl I drew in pencil. What do you think about it? Correct posing? Bugs? Please, give me feedback. I'm going to color her but I want to know if there is any bugs before it? Okay, here it is. Thanks.



-Juha-

[Jaymo]

Nice! Ok, judging from the size of the left one the right breast appears to be missing. The left arm appears to be bit longer than the right one and a bit too bony. The bulge in her right sleeve suggests an elbow set to high, though you can't really tell with cloth... The arc described by the fingers of her right hand looks a bit like it's inherited (this the right word?) by her knuckles, too, which would be not. Try to define the fingers better.
Well, nuff said, maybe I should be off practicing myself rather than giving advice I probably need myself... Have fun.

[This message has been edited by Jaymo (edited October 05, 2000).]

[Francis]

What is she holding...?

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Francis Tsai
TeamGT Studios

[Sergenth]

She's not holding... she's leaning on some partially drawn object. I think she has to do that because her shoulders are very broad and that makes her top-heavy.

Eep, I don't mean to be nasty... I dunno, it may be the clothing that is making some parts of her seem out of proportion. Generally... the knuckles on the hand are at equal height to the base of the crotch. Her hands seem a bit longer while the legs seem to be a bit shorter (but that may be due to her shirt being untucked)

Good approach on cloth folds and hard anatomy shading... she's not just some plastic doll. The wrists and hands have nice detail shading.

[Axl]

The only thing that I can see where a problem lies is that she seems to have a lack of a left breast. Apart from that nice pic.

[Haarg2]

she might be an amazon...i think they had one of their breasts removed/lacking in order to aid their archery skills. Even though those kinky guys at Blizzard North seem to have other ideas...

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--h2

[WOOArg]