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NineZero
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 06, 2001 4:23 am     Reply with quote
short of using the word 'naked' in my topic i'm hoping a few people will at least comment on this one!

i was playing RA2 and i felt like drawing this. quick sketch. background to be thought up first then drawn in. maybe a tank or half a building blown up or something.

any suggestions on the background? oh and yeah, his eyelids need work! heh.





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PostPosted: Fri Apr 06, 2001 4:32 am     Reply with quote
I think it is realy cool. My only comment would be the head wear. The part that blows in the wind, don't seem "real" enough. Maybe you should make it as it is tied up.

anyway, I think it is cool, and I don't think the eyelids need to much work, maybe a bit shorter.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2001 1:19 am     Reply with quote
cool yeah i know the part flying in the wind looks weird.. i might just take it out though i was planning a burning tank as a background.. and smoke from the fire blowing but i'll see i suppose. thanks for the comments.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2001 4:21 pm     Reply with quote
Looks like a good start, I think we'd all like to see some more work done on this pic.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2001 4:51 pm     Reply with quote
Good drawing, I would personally relax the shoulders, then it would look more natural.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2001 5:09 pm     Reply with quote
yeah, unless those are shoulder pad sort of thingies...

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