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robust · Posted: Sat May 19, 2001 6:53 pm

I'm quite pleased with this piece.
Im a beginner at drawing and i decided to draw something so it became a bird of some kind that is flying over some mountains and the sun is setting in the background.
I would really like it if someone would color this picture so I can get some inspiration..

I would love to hear some comments/tips/crits so please drop a message.

I'll be back :P

[ May 22, 2001: Message edited by: robust ]

ViPeRIII · Posted: Sat May 19, 2001 11:56 pm

looks good... but the legs are a little weird

Twice · Posted: Sun May 20, 2001 5:14 am

first of all, I dont' look like a bird. Spend some time going throuh books and stuff so you get a feeling on how to draw the bird. The same goes for the sun and the rocks..... and remember, a drawing should not (in my opinion) consist of an outline. Spend some time on it and give stuff more strokes, to try to make out the form the different objects.

robust · Posted: Sun May 20, 2001 5:18 am

I know that the legs are weird so i'm going to fix that. It's wasn't going to be a real bird.. it's a fantasy kind of bird thingie :P
(This isn't supposed to be a DRAWING it's a quick scetch just for practice)

[ May 22, 2001: Message edited by: robust ]

robust · Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 7:25 am

.: My homepage is updated :.

Probotech · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 9:45 am

Keep at it my friend, practise makes perfect!

Also take note about not using outlines to much.

Dryfire · Posted: Fri May 25, 2001 2:27 pm

yeah, i would try and fix the legs a bit as well, make them wider where they meet the body and shorter