[bitstorm 5]

Hi, I'm very much a newbie here, I suck at intros, so hi and great stuff you guys are doing here

This is an image I've been working on. Still working on the hair/eyes/lever.... I guess that's why this is the wip section

I have no idea why she's pulling a lever. Just that it's an important one.



My tools are scanning sketches in, then redrawing with Illustrator & Photoshop. Very open to critique but please no tomatoes.

Thanks fer lookin'

[gLitterbug]

Hello, welcome onboard!

Not bad, but I think you REALLY should change the skintone and the shading on the face. That will make it much better.
I like the hand on the lever. I hope she doesn�t pull it...
The glasses could need some change in ligthing to make it look more "glassier" I think.
Could you post the uncoloured lineart? would be great. Also I would like to know what technique you use for shading. Thx.

Have fun!

[Breakerboy2]

Hi there.

Her face is definitely a bit too rose colored. Makes here look boiled. I'd make sure the highlights on her face are a little brighter than the highlights on her breasts.

Her overall shape really gets lost since the background is so dark and she fades right into it. Maybe a light shining behind her would help? Or maybe just lightening the background a bit? Anyway, I think there's just too much black back there.

You've got nice linework, don't hide it! Other than the face, your choice of colors works really well. Just a bit dark.