[neal]

first post... sorry it has to suck =]
it's just some abstract(ish) doodle to practice technique that needs to be finnished... not really going
for any particular style, unless you
count "pointless" as a style =]

damned geocities garbage, i hope this picture comes up...




i know the dangling eyeball on the right needs some finnishing touches, but for the life of me, i can't get it to look wet for some reason... suggestions?

neal

[Justa Fledgling]

I have a suggestions neal. Go read
GEOCITIES BLOWS!!!!!NOW WHAT??? Might help ya

[KrayZ]

weird ;]

i'd take that BG away.. kills any effect you're trying to achieve.. or at least tone down the contrast

the black areas just seem too empty.. take that BG.. copy it to another layer.. move it down a bit away from its original position.. and play about with the layer effects.. maybe do this several times.. try with different patterns too..

i'd also change the colour of the BG effect to something like turquoise ;]

the eye.. hmmm.. i'd worry more about the lips =] it does needs to be shinier
.. play about with the dodge tool

i'd also stretch the 'skin' of everything.. as if it's been scraped off the face and nailed down.. hope u get what i mean :]

welp.. this very minute my wacom graphire 2 has just been delivered.. time for FUN! woohoo! =]

laters