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CluelessMorgan · Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 6:54 pm

Here is my latest. I know that it is out of proportion but I would like it if you could CnC it anyways.

Ta

Here it is cropped:

Dryfire · Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 7:19 pm

Hey, thats looks pretty good! All you need to do to fix the proportions i believe is to just make the legs a bit longer and wider. Hips should be the same width as the shoulders. And also the breast should start a bit lower... They start at aroudn the armpits.. so they shoudl be a bit smaller too...

Good job/Good Luck

CluelessMorgan · Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 8:06 pm

thanks for the comment. I drew the hips wider to start with but that just made her look fat.

Does the hips width should end at the inside of the shoulder or outside??

Is it possible to draw some guidlines to help me out?

sacrelicious · Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 9:27 pm

I don't think the hips need to be wider, they should probably be as wide as the rib cage. I think the upper curve of the hips just needs to start a little higher up; try starting the outward curve at the point where the rib cage ceases to slope inwards. The legs look okay to me. Your biggest problem IMO is that the fingers are about half as long as they should be and the head and esp. eyes are too big. The size of the eyes was probably a stylistic decision, so they're okay, but to me it's kind of distracting. Anyway, good start and I look forward to seeing the finished version.

Steven Stahlberg · Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2001 8:10 pm

Yes, I agree, good start!
Here, I tried to draw some guidelines, it's a bit quick so not really exact, but probably in the ballpark anyway.

edit: I realize you may have intended the breasts to be sort of lifted up by her arching her back, and maybe by 'supportive' clothing

, and the camera angle being fairly low, in that case I drew the breasts a bit too low.

[ November 02, 2001: Message edited by: Steven Stahlberg ]

CluelessMorgan · Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2001 3:20 am

Hey thanks for all the input! Thanks for the guidelines. It seems that I was out mainly with the lower part of the body.....well practice makes perfect is what they say!

I was looking for a sort of arch back look not that easy to do!

I still have a long way to come but I think that I will get there.

Thanks again!