[Twincruiser]

New sketch...This time KID from CHRONO CROSS...Enjoy!



[ February 13, 2002: Message edited by: Twincruiser ]

[Kuren]

Hey Twincruiser.

Nice pic, like the shading.
Here are some crits. The thigh/hip that appears closest to us seems flat. I think you should add creases in the area where her shorts bend (hip/thigh area) to give her hip some definition. Also, I think you should tighten the muscle on her calve on this same leg. The front of her calve, the contour should bend inwards (and this angle) instead of outwards like you have now.

The foot on the right looks a lil strange. It's probably due to the shape of her heel and how it attaches to her ankle. I suggest moving the top line and directly attach it to the contour of her lower leg.

The left shoulder looks like it's detached from her body. I think you should make the top contour of her shoulder somehow match up with her body. Or, imagine how her shoulder is now, it's a "cup" shape if you erase her arm and just leave the sleeve of her jacket. You should probably erase the line closest to her body which is the attachment from her shoulder to her body. That would give the impression that her arm is really part of her body

The only visible boobie the cleavage shouldn't be drawn like so. I suggest erasing that line of cleavage and just adding some shadow in there to give the impression of cleavage.

I like her right hand. Shaded nicely. Her glove "band" is misaligned slightly. Though not a big deal though.

And last thing, her jaw stretches to far back and makes her face look smeared. As well as her neck looks a lil thick.

Hope this helps.