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louis finazzo member
Member # Joined: 05 Mar 2002 Posts: 74 Location: overland park, kansas
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Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 8:30 pm |
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had problems w/ the eyes, so i took them out for the time being. had problems w/ the hair, so i took it out for the time being. if there's any c/c's before i get too much farther, i'd appreciate it.
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cartman junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Mar 2002 Posts: 18
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Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 8:36 pm |
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Looking good so far, although it's pretty early in its development. The right ear looks a little funky in terms of placement and shape. The other facial features are well placed. As of now, I'm getting a Scott Baio vibe from it. |
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louis finazzo member
Member # Joined: 05 Mar 2002 Posts: 74 Location: overland park, kansas
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Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2002 10:12 pm |
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here's where i am now, slowly progressing. i've put in about.. oh, 4-5 hours now i think... off and on distracted work mostly. i'm havn't fixed the ear so i'm aware of that, and i havn't got the nerve up to go into the eyes yet ;} anymore c/c's are greatly appreciated.
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RATBAT member
Member # Joined: 28 Feb 2002 Posts: 69 Location: San leandro
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Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2002 12:52 am |
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i like that too. maybe the nose looks a bit flat because there is no shadow hanging off of the side. but then its an early pic so i cant coment. probibly try to bring out the cheek bone with shadows.. hmm nice colores . |
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DeathJester member
Member # Joined: 17 Dec 2001 Posts: 91 Location: Monterey, CA
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Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2002 12:15 am |
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Hey it looks pretty good so far,
just keep up with what you are doing... until you think you can't go any farther.. then ask for some c/c and people will pick it apart for you and tell you what to work on...
good luck |
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