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DeathJester
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 Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 5:19 pm |
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Hi I could use some help with this one, Maybe with lighting and a background? I put in a simple background, Im just not to fond of it.. Maybe just a idea would be good too.
Crits also welcome
If you could do a simple paintover too that would be great.
Thanks much |
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arkoh
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| Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2002 1:49 pm |
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Originally posted by DeathJester:
I put in a simple background, Im just not to fond of it.. Maybe just a idea would be good too.
SIMPLE background? Who are you kiddin? Get rid of it, the sooner the better, it simply ruins every chance you have of getting anywhere with that drawing!
Besides that... got potential! Maybe try to work a bit with the composition of the final drawing, try to come up with a complete scene, a situation, an enemy etc.. that'll give you the needed boost with the background I believe! |
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Duckman2
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| Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2002 1:58 pm |
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| Try to break the flatness you've go going here by using some foreshortening, it makes for a much more interesting picture. |
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