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Alexei Samokhin
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 4:12 am     Reply with quote
so.. http://chat.ru/~mexicanasa/pray.jpg

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Collosimo
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 5:11 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, nobody has replied to this! well I'm bumping it up, because I think it deserves it.

Alexei: You should post the actual picture on the board instead of just a link. People will be more likely to respond if they have a picture right there instead of a link away.

Pretty cool pic. I especially like his left shoulderpad, the reflection makes it look metallic. The sword is to deeply thrust int the ground. A knight may thrust his sword into the ground to make it stand up, but not as far as that! You need to consider the length of the sword a bit more.

You need to do a little more work on the monk. He is looking a little flat. I know you probably intended to do him like this so that the focus is on the knight in the foreground, but it is not quite right.

The proportions of the knight are pretty good. The face needs some work though.

Overall...good work!

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 6:10 pm     Reply with quote
I think you've got a great start with the armor there; Chrome and other metallic surfaces are the hardest stuff to draw.

~{V}~

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 12:14 am     Reply with quote
very nice, although his face needs alot of work, you might want to consider redoing that part with a picture of yourself for referance of proportion (i find that helps when im having problems with doing faces)

keep up the good work, very good job on the chrome btw

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Alexei Samokhin
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2001 11:58 am     Reply with quote
thx friends .. im the beginner in 2d painting ... so i will work under myself :-)


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