Sijun Forums :: View topic - Little try on Children story book flavour :D

Evon · Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2001 2:26 pm

My try on doing something that can be seen in most kid's story book.

I really hope that i'll have a chance to publish kid's books. hehe.. but i have a lot of room to improve.
That's my original character RU, his face only have the word RU and a mouth only. for more abut this character, they are in my page. ^^; that's why he dont have the eyes, the RU are his eyes.
This picture is done with painter 6, with tools like chalk, pastels and crayons.
Comments and crits are all welcome! Please help me improve.

Thankyou

ps: i'm not typing right.

the title of my post sounded weird. ^^;; please ignore it.

[ April 28, 2001: Message edited by: Evon ]

TheSourPatchKid · Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2001 2:32 pm

Its a good painting. I can really see this as a childrens book style. Very childlike.

The grass seems to be too green for a night shot. and You would have to be sure to make the text coincide with the art work.

Dont just have some white or black text slapped in there in Palantino or Geneva type face.

Do some more illustrations.

PS. Do you actually have a story written out that this piece fits into?

Evon · Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2001 2:37 pm

thanks sourpatchkid, i will redo the green's color again, had been trying with the colors, seems like i've not get the right color again.

actually that patch of white text is my signature. ^^; I signed with the pen, didnt typed it in. or maybe i should make a lighter one and put it more to the bottom?

actually he is in one of my daily life comics, just that the story goes more on my daily life with my friends. But i'm thinking of making side stories with him.

[ April 28, 2001: Message edited by: Evon ]