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br0un0
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0kay, hum, i wanted to play with various sources of artificial light, neon like.
But i think i've fucked the image by focusing to much on it.
Anyway tell me what do you think of it.
Forget it i think the server is down...
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wayfinder
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| Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 5:06 am |
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| the city looks like it's painted on the wall. |
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Socar MYLES
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| Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 5:09 am |
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I do love the colours, and the rude sign. (Mental note to self: Rude signs add an excellent atmosphere to sci-fi style pictures.) I think the lighting is very pleasing, but it might benefit from a little more specificity of direction. For example, on the cityscape that is showing through the crack in the wall, there is no definable light-direction at all. The exceptionally well-lit building on the left doesn't cast any more light pollution around it than the less luminous buildings around it, for instance.
That said, I love the atmosphere, and all the little figures lurking nastily around. There's a very grungy (in a good sense) feel to it. Good show. |
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Jenn
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| Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 6:10 am |
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wow.. thats a fkn awesome pic.. I love it... so many ideas and so on built into this ppic... 
*glues it to her monitor* |
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Dr.Squirley
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| Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 2:02 pm |
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Wow, incredible
If i could draw in your style i probably would not be doing what i do  |
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daz199
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| Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 3:17 pm |
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Define/Darken tha shadows a bit more
looking nice! |
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Collosimo
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| Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 4:23 pm |
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I think you did wuite well.. still a bit of work though..
The first apparent thing I noticed about your pic was the luminous neon atmosphere, so well done....!
I love the colours you have a good thing going there. |
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Dthind
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| Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 6:47 pm |
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| I like the style a lot ! |
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geoman2k
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| Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 8:26 pm |
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i like it, but the city need a LOT more depth to it... i actallu thought it was some kind of wire thing sticking on the wall or soemthing.
other than that, its a GREAT painting |
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br0un0
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| Posted: Sun May 06, 2001 5:29 am |
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Many thanks to everyone.
I see now that the cityscape is quite crappy. The lack of depth is obvious.
Socar myles: You were right about the left building, it should cast more light...
I think i'll work more methodically next time...
Anyway that's really cool you liked it.
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