[Zekie]

Well.. It is her again.. I kinda changed the hairstyle a bit, and refined my profile. Anyhow, it didnt come out all that well, the clor isn't strong and it still looks kinda flat. I think this is better than the previous one though. I noticed that I made her look a bit snotty. lol. Didn't really realized till i was done. Anyhow, I would care to listen to tips, critques and comments.

[Briareos]

I like your dainty noses better, but if its a portrait, then np there. Umm, the collar bones aren't in the right position... shift more left I think...

[burn0ut]

the clavicle in woman usually goes very slightly downwards, rather than mens where it goes at a very slight angle upwards

anyways i dig your style man, keep it up

[ftgjcf]

i saw your previous ver of this pic and now i think this one is better. Good job! I like it a lot
Be careful with that highlight in her hair.. Have you tried mixing some blue into the highlight ?

[Freddio]

[Jucas]

I like it.
Crits:
With the thick lines around the image I don't get a feeling of roundness or fullness in the face. The subtle shading isn't really working because the outside line is taking most of my focus.

-jono

[CapnPyro]

looks pretty good. been looking at tarada much? the main thing i see is that the darkest skin tone is still really light. maybe change it up a little bit. also just for color variations, things like the nose and cheeks will be more red, the eye sockets more blue etc. also the hair is pretty cool.. but i dont like the horizontal streak in it. other then that, it seems pretty good. overall i like it alot though, nice stuff