Sijun Forums :: View topic - "The F.U.T's" (two-page comic)

visual myriad · Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 3:39 am

G'day,

Just having some fun with a strip that appears in an aussie kids mag called Mania. We put it together in a couple days, but turned out ok:

Oh yeah, anyone wanna guess what F.U.T stands for???

jcFIG · Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 3:48 am

How WOUD! <<[In a JArJar Binks voice]

-Tepox- · Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 4:48 am

hehe! the colors are nice but it's hard to understand what's going on there.

Akolyte · Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 5:18 am

Wow, lots of boinging and doinking

Kinda cool...

Jezebel · Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 5:25 am

Hey Visual -

What ever happened with that galileo project you were doing? The artwork for that was so stunning and I was looking for it the other day but the links were down.

Nice stuff here by the way :>

Matt Elder · Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 7:51 am

The artwork is nice, stylised and well done. My only problem is that I'm not sure where it is going and what is happening. I think you could have establised the bouncing idea in a couple of panels zooming in or out on the character. Then have a couple of panels alternating between the donk, boing, and point to take it where ever you want to go with it. Thus you would probably have half a page to play around with to get some other idea across and/or put a mini-conclusion to the sequence. I think that you have an interesting idea here but the 'story telling' aspect has probably let it down a bit.

visual myriad · Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2001 9:32 pm

Thanks for replying jcFig, Tepox & Akolyte. I answered your question via an email, Jez-- did you receive it? Matt, great crit and I agree 100%. Hopefully next issue will be better...

Here's a couple preview panels from the next two-page episode:

[666]Flat · Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 5:20 am

And I thought TELETUBBIES was HEAD BANGED SHIAT...

(Nice colorZ though)

MrLuisDiaz · Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2001 2:22 pm

Fucked up toys?