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tek9z member
Member # Joined: 28 Nov 2001 Posts: 269 Location: bxl
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2002 2:15 am |
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This one didn't really came out as I
imagined it.
Probably overdid the women...
c&c anyway?
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Tiger Eaten member
Member # Joined: 17 Nov 2000 Posts: 226 Location: Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2002 3:12 am |
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I like this very much, I think you have captured a mood here. The expressions that the women have are very interesting and I think fit well with the scene. Your choice of colors is very good as well as their is nice contrast between the table top and the neon signs in the background.
If I were to suggest anything be added to this work it would be to add the suggestion of people to the background. Thats one thing about downtown Japan, you are never alone.
I would be interested to see other peoples takes on this work. |
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SporQ member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2000 Posts: 639 Location: Columbus, Ohio
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2002 6:16 am |
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thats sweet man, im digging the cyberpunk feel of your recent stuff, this and that gibson bridge. keep em coming man. i like the look of that left girl, nice attitude  |
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madmouth member
Member # Joined: 19 Dec 2001 Posts: 180 Location: elsewhere
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2002 3:41 pm |
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oooh....I've never seen something like this. beautiful. interesting subject matter |
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Bishop_Six member
Member # Joined: 13 Dec 2000 Posts: 646 Location: Arizona, US
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2002 8:42 pm |
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This is very interesting. It's very cyberpunk and I like it.
The environment outside the window(or what I perceive to be a window) is pretty ambiguous; it looks like maybe a couple signs then a bunch of nothing. If the outside was developed more and was made to look more like a vast flashy city, I think it would add a lot to the picture.
The women's faces don't seem to be shaded at all. Some harsh, dramatic lighting on them would be really cool.
And what are those things on their chests? *waits for someone to make the obvious joke* |
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JeffTheKing junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Oct 2000 Posts: 48 Location: Oakville, Ont, CANADA
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2002 8:49 pm |
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Ginormous boobs! of course. seriously though i like this image, if it had been pollished more by cleaning up loose lines etc. it would be awsome tek9z didnt say if it was a final but id like it completed a lot.  |
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johnwun junior member
Member # Joined: 29 Dec 2001 Posts: 38 Location: Santa Cruz
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2002 11:12 pm |
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...Love the atari ref.  |
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tek9z member
Member # Joined: 28 Nov 2001 Posts: 269 Location: bxl
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Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2002 7:51 am |
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thanx y'all!
actually this image is quit finished for me
-fed up with -is more like it
and yes 'cyberpunk' is my kinda thing indeed
More of that later... |
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