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Noctali · member Member # Joined: 06 Jun 2001 Posts: 91 Location: ?

This is a preview because i put in color quickly, crits...

jesusclone · Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 7:47 am

I think the coloring is the best part actually, good work

...ya tree huggin hippy!

heheh jk

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Andromeda · Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 8:32 am

WOW ! Ganja-Elf.... thats concept for you. LOL.

The black shadings oh her belly, they look too black. they look more like stains than shading.

The blunt is a bit too huge... unless you meant it to be that way, but it puts the whole pic off i think.

And the one thing that irritates me most about the picture is her pose.
Its a basic 'super-model' pose. A 'pretty-girl' pose.. its a very basic pose.
For a ganja-elf, a 'super-model' pose just dont seem right.
Maybe if she was sitting crossed legged on a tall stool smoking that weed, or up on a tree would suit her better.

Anyway overall, i love the piece, do her colors properly and give her some kick ass background, and repost your pic ASAP, i would love to see the final image.

faeklone · Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 7:02 pm

I think she has a great look and all, but I must concur with the guy who said that she looks to supermodel-like to be a 'rasta mama' and smoke up. I would have put her in a more laid back and relaxed position, using the charms of her 'charms' to put the point accross that she is a woman or feminine. More like a WWF Lita style girl or like Pink. a girl that is still sexy while at the same time one of the guys.

Make the jeans more formfitting, as they seem to be hugging her body anyway, and her one breast that we can see is a little too perky to match the other one.

All in all though, I love the pic. Gonna have to use your idea on a similar pic for myself.

Molako_Plus · Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 8:43 pm

do what the guys above said....especially a tree pose....or maybe make her into a fairie sitting on a mushroom

but i personaly would rather have her drop that fatty and take out a cool elvish peace pipe.

her right tit is sticking out of her arm pit....put that crecent to underline the bottom of her tit so it looks like her THC shirt is squishing it against her chest.
great concept... ill never look at Legolas & Galadriel the same

Noctali · member Member # Joined: 06 Jun 2001 Posts: 91 Location: ?

Update of my pic but without great light effect...(i will update again...)

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Noctali · member Member # Joined: 06 Jun 2001 Posts: 91 Location: ?

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skankerzero · Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2002 9:45 am

i actually like the first 'quick color' one better than then smooth colored one, but that's just my taste. I think that style fits the linework better.

i wanna see more elven girls.

Noctali · member Member # Joined: 06 Jun 2001 Posts: 91 Location: ?

I remaked a clean sketch...

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Sukhoi · Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2002 11:49 am

IS SHE STONERD??? THAT ROXORS THC 4 REAL DUDE BIG AS WHEED YO; CHILL YO!!!12 OUT!! PEACE!

Now that I have aired my feelings toward the wheed subject, I'll comment the drawing a little....

Her right shoulder (our left) seems to be sticking out too far.

Her crotch (for a lack of a better word) seems a little too high..just a little.

The edges of her pants seems a tad too loose. Maybe they would fall down now?

Nice linework, the shading need a little work..there are always something to work on hehe, I gotta go back, working on mine

Sukhoi

Molako_Plus · Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2002 2:31 pm

now thats an awesome elf man... i feel proud that you considered my suggestions.

now all we need is some psychadelic colourin...lol

great skills you got man. keep it up

AcjBizar · Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2002 4:04 pm

Hehe, THC is where I live (The Hague City).