[Atherium]

I would love some C&C in this from anyone and those who do layout alot. The image is a stock squaresoft promo image but I did everyhting else from the text to the bar code.

ok, tear me apart
http://novemberstar.20m.com/ff.jpg

[Basement bound]

The main image is of so much poorer quality then the inset images that it is distractful.

perhaps too much text?

[cptoonz]

Howdy. Overall compostion, color scheme, and layout looks great to me. I do agree with Basementbound, in some sense...if you could kick up the rez on the central image I think it would be more cohesive...she appears very grainy while all is else is quite crisp (if you can't sharpen her up, then you may try slightly blurring the other stuff...just a thought). I hope that helps Nice work, all around, though!