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PostPosted: Thu Nov 14, 2002 8:45 am     Reply with quote
This is just a pic I drew last night, its about 16in X 12in I think, cant remember right now Smile anyhow hope you like it


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 7:37 am     Reply with quote
Great detail, very life like. However the lips seems misshapen... Its possible to smile like that, but the shape of the lip touching the teeth dosent sit right with me!?!

Love the eyes and hair! Keep it up Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 12:58 am     Reply with quote
I like it.
Never good to use pure white as BG.
textured/darker/like face = better, believe me
Anyway, I still like it
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 8:16 am     Reply with quote
Hey guys this is the fixed version anyhow hope you like it

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 9:44 am     Reply with quote
I like it. Good shading and shapes, it's not easy when doing a portrait like this (at least for me).

The new background looks much better.

I have the feeling the mouth is bit distorted, tilted downwards on the right. Also one eyebrow seems bigger than the other.

The eyes are really beautiful. And I really like the loose feeling of the hair.

Keep going!
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 06, 2002 8:00 am     Reply with quote
Hey all thanks for all your replys and comments, I too still feel the mouth looks a little crooked but I think its the scan, because in person it looks fine, Ill try and rescan it in or take a digital pic of it ( when I scan it I have to scan it 4 times and put it togeather ) anyhow thanks again
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