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mario36
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 Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2003 8:59 pm |
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I'm in the middle of making a new comic. It'll be a comedy about a policeman named "Johnny Bluebottle" who does really stupid things. I'm trying to improve my concept/character design as well as my storytelling with this project. Here is a preliminary sketch that I made. I just wanted to see what you all thought about it so far. Any suggestions are welcome.
--mario
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Capt. Fred
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| Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2003 4:05 am |
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Great, wonderful heads! Really great.
I like the whole character w/ body less though.
I love the expressions. |
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Merystic
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| Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2003 10:22 pm |
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Good work on the face...however, the full body pose seems a little effeminate. If I were you, I'd straighten his legs and place his feet a little further apart, or if not that then perhaps straighten his legs and have his heels together and his toes pointing in opposite directions. The face you've drawn to me says "stupid" (I mean that in a complimentary way), but the pose doesn't.
Hehe, love the teeth. 
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