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m703-324
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Ritaku
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| Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2003 1:00 pm |
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oo i like the colours you're using. also you got some nice sharp edges of shading for a nice effect. to crit i would say maybe the head is positioned just SLIGHTLY too far to one side to seem like a plausible angle. is there going to be much more added (since it is called FIREbunny) so we know WHY he is in the position he is?
other than that i like it and its original so i look forward to viewing the final piece. =)
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Nucleardan
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| Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2003 5:28 am |
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first thing i thought of when i saw this: kick ass.
nice work, really don't have any crit, just wanted to tell you nice idea and great painting.  |
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neff
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| Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2003 8:56 am |
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this is so stylish! yeah!
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eyalyab
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| Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2003 1:22 pm |
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this is really nice. he looks evil. teehee.
in addition to the head problem that Ritaku pointed out, i think that in light of foreshortening, maybe the front feet that's closer to us should be bigger than the one at the back. same for the closer arm in respect to the farther away arm. this could give the bunny more depth.
good job and post up the finished one here too. |
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