[speculart]

A friend recently sent me a short story that he would like to turn into a graphic novel. Its great set in the present and 1690. The characters reincarnate throughout and we regularly see them in different times. Thier character remains the same but refines as we move forward to the present. This is the lawyer for a pimp. I am using this as a piece for my folio, looking for work at the moment.
Would love any advice or comments.
Speculart

[Nilwort]

I like the colors you've used. If there's anything that I'd want to point out, it's the relationship of the left figure in the foreground to the larger guy in the center. Maybe it was intentional, but they are really close together and it is hard to differentiate between them, especially near the figure's left arm and the side of the guy's face. It seems a little cramped in that area. Maybe some different shading or colors could help make them stand out? Nice job overall.

[speculart]

See what you mean there, its just a coloured page from my sketch book kind of a starting point. will probably take out that guy all together in the final. Thanks for your input!