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Eudoxus
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2000 8:16 pm     Reply with quote
Hey fellow bretheren! Greetings. Brother Eudoxus with you once again, forgive me, but I feel it a neccesity to post my poorly drawn scrawls. I've been experimenting with a manga style of toning -forgive me if ot looks a tad too blotchy!

Anyway, here it is:



Question: Why should all toning be smooth?
Is it part of some unified conformist conspiracy to make alll art the same.

OR does it just look NiCe?

cheers!
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DuKEZ
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2000 8:22 pm     Reply with quote
shes a bit ummm.. yellow?
dont you think? :P

[This message has been edited by DuKEZ (edited July 13, 2000).]
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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2000 8:47 pm     Reply with quote
That's a cool style... Anatomically it looks great, and the odd colorization creates a nice effect.

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DeathbyDuplicity
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2000 12:30 am     Reply with quote
Looks cool, the background effect kinda washes it away though! The anatomy looks good, except from the nose to the chin! Nice look though, looks like it should go in one of those lady magz.
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Nex
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2000 4:26 am     Reply with quote
the rendering looks cool, but the face really would need some work.. the nose looks too big and the lines left and right of the mouth have too much weight in my opinion, she looks strange with that strong lines there. Des she wear trousers? If not you should make the lines flow there a bit more fluid and curvy. (a bit too jagged now)

Cool one though. esp. like the arms and her upper body

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TeAnne
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2000 3:06 pm     Reply with quote
Your work reminds me of Litchenstein and I like it. You have a grand talent
BTW...Perth WA here. Avagudeweegend.

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Slicer
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2000 4:04 pm     Reply with quote
I looks nice but I have to agree with nex about the face. and doesn�t her right arm seem to be a bit to muscular?
Maybe it�s just me being jeoulus.
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Shadow-X-
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Location: Formerly Ontario,Canada, Now Vancouver, B.C, CANADA, where people hate the Toronto Maple Leafs

PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2000 4:13 pm     Reply with quote
whats wrong with yellow? It's perfectly fine!! GOOO JAPAN!!!!!!! (Btw, I am yellow, samurai power all the way)

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Eudoxus
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2000 4:55 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks peoplez for your critique, very much appreciated and a BIG HELLO to all the people here from the land of OZ!

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Fred Flick Stone
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2000 5:23 pm     Reply with quote
eudoxus-i thought your name was exodus for a minute there...Heres a couple of things you could do to help the image a bit-

1. when drawing sexy babes, dont use a lot of line work on the interior of her form. Meaning, the lines in her face the rippled folds on her left side, the lines at her hips and the line on the left leg. THose lines actually age a person, not make them look better. I use to have this problem all the time. I know the muscles are there, so I should identify them. The problem always was that the woman I drew now aged 10 to 20 years because of all the additional line work involved in the drawing.
Like the laugh lines around her mouth, only draw the lines next to the corners of the lips, and maybe a bit of line coming off her nose, but dont connect them together. The mouth area of her in the image looks about 15 years older than the rest of her face.

Her flesh tones are too orange. It has the same coloration as Synj's Orangyfat guy. Use color photos to get the skin tones accurate, till you have used them enough to mix them without reference.

Tones don't necessarily have to be smooth, animation proves this. Especially Japanese animation. the values are always broken into three, either in the shadows or in the lights. THe actual color, a highlight, and a darker value of them. Tones dont have to be smooth, just within a same tonal family...I like the style you are working with, a combination of Japanese animation and european comics...keep up the good work...

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el tigre
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 15, 2000 1:31 am     Reply with quote
her face looks like the old woman in "something about mary", the one with breasts like saddlebags. Too many sunbeds I believe. Looks good apart from that though, nice style!

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