[ZiG]

I've worked on her quite a bit since the last post. Really big thanks to samdragon for the critique, it was most helpful. I really tried to play with line quality in hopes of showing weight, which ended up giving the pic a different feel entirely, but im pretty happy with it. Anyhow enough rambling, here it is:



and here�s a link to a highres version:

http://www.gametome.net/rvance/julie-hires.jpg

-Zig

[Bubonic]

Looks really nice, and looks well finished, no eraser lines and stuff. nice detail, and very catching eyes..Although the back part of her hair doesnt look right.. Great job though, cant wait to see her with colors..

[ZiG]

Back to the top with you. It dosen't inspire any replies?

-Zig

[dEATH.Tool]

Cool sig.

[micke]

That's pretty nice.
Maybe the hair could be worked more on.

[Isric]

Well, her nose lacks....grace. And by default, because she has very little chin, I would shun her. That and her square breasts. I remember you mentioned that you wanted it to be a hipppy/braburning sorta thing, but sagging breasts don't always become square.

Why don't you just make them small? That would be a much better look than saggy.

[tzekin]

Hi . Nice drawing:-) but I thing the left eye should be smaller
You should smaller the left nostril too, because the nose looks a little bit bent.

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