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nil900
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2000 4:34 am     Reply with quote
Here's my latest picture. There's a lot of work to do. I don't really know in witch position I should draw the hands (holding a gun!?). It would be nice if someone could draw a helping hand.
Besides don't blame me for the face cause I had no photo as source, I'll work on it (the eyes ...aaarrghh).

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Joachim
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2000 5:53 am     Reply with quote


you have some nice going there...
I don't have time to try to make a hand or something, but I could comment on the character if you don't mind.

I guess, since you want a gun in, he is supposed to be some sort of a space ranger or something. Now he looks very afraid. The head leaning forward makes him look like he is about to cry. Also, the eyes and fave looks very sad and relaxed. He needs more expression both in face and body. I don't know if you want him to be more tough though ? ...I think you should try to look at some pics of some movie heroes, maybe some sci-fi pics, look at some faces and see if you can make some better expressions like.. chest up, tense eyes, etc...

Anyway, nice going, post the progress.

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Rinaldo
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2000 7:50 am     Reply with quote
looks like it's coming along nicely. Joachim pretty much said what I would have had in mind (and then some). Maybe make the eyes smaller. the iris is too big and the space the're taking up on the face is also a bit too much. it makes him look small and childlike.

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Binke
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2000 2:50 pm     Reply with quote
Hmmm, very moody background

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