[Zenzuke]

Hopefully, this might be a character for a game, but don't know why, his proportions seem a bit strange to me. Comment, please



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Look! There's a three headed monkey behind you!

[[gsn]kore]

thats better than what I can do.. but it looks like a foot is sticking out of his left arm sleeve :P (stuby little fingers) mabey if you show where his thumb went... I wish I knew how you made those pant so good!

[Ian]

Me gusta!

[Brain]

Kewl piccie! @:-)

Apart from the hand needing a little fix, the back is too far out. Crop that in a little. In the current position, he's either oddly hunchbacked or his arm's quite dislocated.

Also, try using dark greys (or grays, however you wish to spell it) instead of straight black for the jacket. This'll give you the ability to add highlights and shadows to give the jacket and body form. Crop some of the sole of the (his) right shoe off, and add a splash of highlight aswell.

Keep up the goodly work!

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Brain
http://brain.gamekey.com/

[Zenzuke]

Thanks everybody.
Kore: That's not a foot, hehehehe. His fingers are not extended, so you only see half of the hand. I thought this whould be a more natural pose, but obviously I haven't drawn it so it looks clear.
Ian: Quite good spanish
Brain: Very useful comments, I'll try to give his coat a little fix. The background, although, was made in a hurry, and it's not even in a right perspective, so i'll make it just with plain color.

S#it, i've posted this two times by error.

[This message has been edited by Zenzuke (edited October 22, 2000).]

[Zenzuke]

Thanks everybody.
Kore: That's not a foot, hehehehe. His fingers are not extended, so you only see half of the hand. I thought this whould be a more natural pose, but obviously I haven't drawn it so it looks clear.
Ian: Quite good spanish
Brain: Very useful comments, I'll try to give his coat a little fix. The background, although, was made in a hurry, and it's not even in a right perspective, so i'll make it just with plain color.